I have an essay about same sex marriage and aint sure if my grammar is ok. Please be honest but not rude. Just a few sentences:
Gay marriage should be legalized because it is inhuman and uncivilized. Our constitution give us many rights and liberties. And one of the basic freedoms is pursuit of happiness which gay people have not. They cannot marry people they are in love with and it makes them unhappy. We violate their freedoms and liberties. Why others can choose who maries who and these pepel who want to start a family are sufferings.
Thnx in advance for taking your time!=)